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Editing Practice 9/13/10

This is a short blog post that I came across. Your assignment is to take this horrible, nonsensical writing and shape it into a piece that people can read without cringing and laughing. Re-write it in the comments and together, we will save this disaster. Thanks for participating!

“Selena Gomez is a great singer and a great danser but I don’t think that she must be compared with Lady Gaga.Selena Gomez is a much beautiful girl but Laday Gaga has a bigger succes.I like Selena Gomez and I want to have her own style.While she was filming her commercial for Dream Out Loud, Selena Gomez launches into a small interpretation of Alejandro, the latest single from Lady Gaga!Selena Gomez is very talentated.

After many praises Justin Bieber, Selena Gomez was declared to be a fan of Katy Perry and Lady GaGa, and to walk the speech, it outlines some of the choreographed movements of the clip “Alejandro”. It’s still nice to see that Selena Gomez is able to say lots of nice things about her friends stars! Selena Gomez is a nice person and I think that Selena Gomez proved that many times.

Personally, I find it pretty good hummed! So to summarize, Selena Gomez is full of resources, since it can sing Lady gaga while doing makeup, but it is also full of advice for a first dating! Note also that she seems very happy with the song that Katy Perry has written for the album, Katy Perry says she be her “rock goddess”! Really nice that Selena Gomez, right?I like Selena Gomez very much.”

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2 thoughts on “Editing Practice 9/13/10

  1. Jenny Woods on said:

    Selena Gomez is a great singer and a great dancer, but I don’t think that she should be compared to Lady Gaga.Selena Gomez is a very beautiful girl but Lady Gaga is a bigger success. I like Selena Gomez and I want to have her own style. While she was filming her commercial for Dream Out Loud, Selena Gomez launches into a small interpretation of Alejandro, the latest single from Lady Gaga!Selena Gomez is very talented.

    After many praises from Justin Bieber, Selena Gomez was declared to be a fan of Katy Perry and Lady GaGa, and to talk the speech, it outlines some of the choreographed movements of the clip “Alejandro”. It’s still nice to see that Selena Gomez is able to say lots of nice things about her friends stars! Selena Gomez is a nice person and I think that Selena Gomez proved that many times.

    Personally, I find it pretty good humor! So to summarize, Selena Gomez is full of resources, since it can sing Lady gaga while doing makeup, but it is also full of advice for a first dating! Note also that she seems very happy with the song that Katy Perry has written for the album, Katy Perry says she be her “rock goddess”! Really nice that Selena Gomez, right?I like Selena Gomez very much.”

  2. Helyn Young on said:

    “Selena Gomez is a great singer and a great dancer but I don’t think that she should be compared with Lady Gaga. Selena Gomez is more beautiful than Lady Gaga even though Gaga has more success. I like Selena Gomez and I want to have a style much like hers. While she was filming her commercial for ‘Dream Out Loud’, Selena Gomez launched into a small interpretation of Alejandro, the latest single from Lady Gaga. Selena Gomez is very talentated.

    After many praises from Justin Bieber, Selena Gomez was declared to be a fan of Katy Perry and Lady GaGa, and to be able to talk nicely about them. It outlines some of the choreographed movements of the clip “Alejandro”. It’s still nice to see that Selena Gomez is able to say lots of nice things about her fellow stars! Selena Gomez is a nice person and I think that Selena Gomez has proved that many times.

    So to summarize, Selena Gomez is full of resources, since she can sing Lady gaga while doing makeup and is also full of advice for a first date! Note also that she seems very happy with the song that Katy Perry has written for the album. Katy Perry says she is her “rock goddess”! Really nice of Selena Gomez, right? I like Selena Gomez very much.”

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